Post by *innocence«} on May 3, 2009 15:00:41 GMT -5
Alright guys! i know a lot of you guys were really anxious to get your results for the poetry contest, and the time has come! (:
We got 3 entries, and I have to say they were all so amazing! We all loved each and every single one of it. But we only had one first place winner. You guys did your best and that's what really matters, this isn't the end of a poetry contest, i assure you that this was a success for a first timer. And we will be having another one very soon.
2 of the staff members including I judged your poems. If you have a problem with our scoring or if you think it's unfair, then suck it up. Because we won't take any whining. we wrote the truth and we can't change that. Sorry if I'm sounding mean but I'm saying what i think. The comments are anonymous, therefore you will not know who wrote it, i mixed up a bunch of comments from us and put it all in. We hope it helps you in future poems. (:
Enough of my talking, anyways, and the winner of the MST poetry contest isss....
KAITLYN (youmakemeloveyou);
with a score of 55/60>!
Your prize - blend, 10 karma, and 80 posts (:
Comments- we liked it, but it didn't flow very well.. but we liked how it rhymed and we could also understand it (: We think you hit it right on. we also really liked how you used short words and sentences but they all fit In together and rhymed. It was really good (: great job, you deserve it.
The second place winner issss....
ALICE (AlicexXx);
with a score of 52.3/60>!
Your prize - one free miley icon, 7 karma, 40 posts (:
Comments - we liked how it rhymed, but you changed rhyme schemes in the middle of it. but you she used too much metaphors. it was okay. So-so. But overall it was good for a 10 year old (: but overall we loved it! It just needed to be a tad longer.
And, the third place winner iss.....
TEAKA (. teaka !.);
with a score of 50/60>!
Your prize - one free miley exclusive picture, 5 karma, 20 posts (:
Comments - we really liked yours. it was good that you expressed your feelings about someone/something, but u could have been more poetic about it. What we loved about the poem is that it was very deep. What we didn't like is that it was a little sappy. You could have made it brighter at the end, or something different. but the one thing that we thought you did is that a bunch of the lines are from the song crazier by taylor swift, and we didn't really like that you copied it. but overall we thought it was well written though, and we could clearly understand what u was talking about.
You will get your prizes probably by the end of the week by pm, we have to make it first, but please don't pm us asking when you will be receiving them. We have a life, so we can't get it done very quickly.
Thank you everyone for participating, hope to see you next time!
- julie
If you want to see the poem entries, please look below (: If you think that your poem is not the right one, please contact me.
Kaitlyn's Poem:
Its fine,
Its cool,
I'll be okay,
Without you.
My hearts,
The only one,
On the line,
This time.
You won,
I lost,
Whose game is this,
Anyway?
I thought you were,
Something special,
All those messages,
Were just a lie.
Right now,
I'm not going,
To see the big picture,
But one day,
I'll look back,
And finally see,
That we were never,
Meant to be.
You were just a fool,
In the game of love,
Couldn't ever make,
The right move.
Chose the wrong girl,
And passed a good one up,
Without ever looking back,
Yeah that was you.
Oh yeah.
<3
Alice's Poem:
Take a chance when you take a dive,
into the ocean and through the good and bad.
Life stings you like bees in a beehive,
even when you're feeling happy or sad.
Take a risk because changes can bring freshness,
Look at the sky above and make a wish
because a star cannot hold a torch to light another's path without brightening our own.
Pick up the phone, and make some changes
Teaka's Poem:
Teaka wanted hers removed, didn't want it "exposed."
We got 3 entries, and I have to say they were all so amazing! We all loved each and every single one of it. But we only had one first place winner. You guys did your best and that's what really matters, this isn't the end of a poetry contest, i assure you that this was a success for a first timer. And we will be having another one very soon.
2 of the staff members including I judged your poems. If you have a problem with our scoring or if you think it's unfair, then suck it up. Because we won't take any whining. we wrote the truth and we can't change that. Sorry if I'm sounding mean but I'm saying what i think. The comments are anonymous, therefore you will not know who wrote it, i mixed up a bunch of comments from us and put it all in. We hope it helps you in future poems. (:
Enough of my talking, anyways, and the winner of the MST poetry contest isss....
KAITLYN (youmakemeloveyou);
with a score of 55/60>!
Your prize - blend, 10 karma, and 80 posts (:
Comments- we liked it, but it didn't flow very well.. but we liked how it rhymed and we could also understand it (: We think you hit it right on. we also really liked how you used short words and sentences but they all fit In together and rhymed. It was really good (: great job, you deserve it.
The second place winner issss....
ALICE (AlicexXx);
with a score of 52.3/60>!
Your prize - one free miley icon, 7 karma, 40 posts (:
Comments - we liked how it rhymed, but you changed rhyme schemes in the middle of it. but you she used too much metaphors. it was okay. So-so. But overall it was good for a 10 year old (: but overall we loved it! It just needed to be a tad longer.
And, the third place winner iss.....
TEAKA (. teaka !.);
with a score of 50/60>!
Your prize - one free miley exclusive picture, 5 karma, 20 posts (:
Comments - we really liked yours. it was good that you expressed your feelings about someone/something, but u could have been more poetic about it. What we loved about the poem is that it was very deep. What we didn't like is that it was a little sappy. You could have made it brighter at the end, or something different. but the one thing that we thought you did is that a bunch of the lines are from the song crazier by taylor swift, and we didn't really like that you copied it. but overall we thought it was well written though, and we could clearly understand what u was talking about.
You will get your prizes probably by the end of the week by pm, we have to make it first, but please don't pm us asking when you will be receiving them. We have a life, so we can't get it done very quickly.
Thank you everyone for participating, hope to see you next time!
- julie
If you want to see the poem entries, please look below (: If you think that your poem is not the right one, please contact me.
Kaitlyn's Poem:
Its fine,
Its cool,
I'll be okay,
Without you.
My hearts,
The only one,
On the line,
This time.
You won,
I lost,
Whose game is this,
Anyway?
I thought you were,
Something special,
All those messages,
Were just a lie.
Right now,
I'm not going,
To see the big picture,
But one day,
I'll look back,
And finally see,
That we were never,
Meant to be.
You were just a fool,
In the game of love,
Couldn't ever make,
The right move.
Chose the wrong girl,
And passed a good one up,
Without ever looking back,
Yeah that was you.
Oh yeah.
<3
Alice's Poem:
Take a chance when you take a dive,
into the ocean and through the good and bad.
Life stings you like bees in a beehive,
even when you're feeling happy or sad.
Take a risk because changes can bring freshness,
Look at the sky above and make a wish
because a star cannot hold a torch to light another's path without brightening our own.
Pick up the phone, and make some changes
Teaka's Poem:
Teaka wanted hers removed, didn't want it "exposed."