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Post by somedaysoon* on Apr 27, 2009 19:52:26 GMT -5
I thought we had something special, But obviously not, Because you left my heart in two. I was waiting for that day, To be the one to hold you tight, Finally I thought, My wish was coming true. You looked my way, As I walked the halls, Didn't realize who was behind me, Her. I didn't believe it, When you sent the message, Telling me the truth, What I really was. I finally thought, Today would be the day, Where I finally caught your eye, But hers caught yours first, And I'll just have to live. Wipe the tear, Because I just heard, The news. I really thought today would be the day, When I would, Catch your eye, We would share, Something special, Live our own, Little fairytale, Be the only one, To understand eachother. Once again I was wrong. I failed my mission. Again. This is a rough draft, I'll probably still edit it, but I just want some imput. FYI this is just a sample, not the real thing.
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Post by *innocence«} on May 1, 2009 18:53:49 GMT -5
awww! this is really cute. Very well written (:
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Post by somedaysoon* on May 2, 2009 14:08:13 GMT -5
Thank you so much, glad I finally got a comment.
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