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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 27, 2009 19:51:06 GMT -5
Here's another poem of mine, once again, please do NOT steal. You know how I feel about that, i'm really seriously about my poetry..me poetess (: To You:
I am but a silhouette of broken dreams. Emotion bound within by seams. And all that I can share Is but a single, solemn tear. From my lips no words are spoke Except those that are provoked. As this pain knows but a word By which its feeling is inferred.
This endless emotion. My foolish devotion. To you. To you.
This eternity of mine Has sought for things divine. An effluent charm upon your face Has left me longing your embrace. Your eyes they fascinate And my actions they dictate. A paralytic fear Of making this declare.
This endless emotion. My foolish devotion. To you. To you.
Every second that I waste Form moments I cannot retrace. But on this time I mustn't dwell As true love is the only hello. And without it life would be Like a smile without its glee. In hopes this love with thrive To you I will provide
My single, solemn tear.
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Post by somedaysoon* on Apr 27, 2009 19:54:10 GMT -5
That was really nice. I liked the purple text. (:
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Post by |*|Long Live|*| on Apr 27, 2009 20:52:21 GMT -5
One word:
AAAAMAAAAZZZING!!
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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 27, 2009 21:20:04 GMT -5
thanks guys. xD
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Post by snowflakesFALLING;* on Apr 28, 2009 15:08:48 GMT -5
wow that was really good! i like how it rhymed... i like poems that rhyme.. xD
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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 28, 2009 20:40:37 GMT -5
lala, me too. xD thanks
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Post by |*|Long Live|*| on May 1, 2009 0:05:38 GMT -5
No problem:)
What's your inspiration?
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Post by *innocence«} on May 1, 2009 18:52:51 GMT -5
for this poem, or in general?
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Post by * alice ♥ on May 4, 2009 12:02:35 GMT -5
It's sooo good. You have a talent, Julie. Keep doing what you are doing.
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