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Post by |*|Long Live|*| on Apr 20, 2009 19:58:38 GMT -5
This is a song by me called Febuary Stars. It's not my best, I've done better ( I think) but my friend Korinna said it was REALLY GOOD. And thought I should show you guys. So here it is! Comment. ( I dont think it's good)
(Piano till chorus) The Febuary Stars. Never seem to fade. Even in the rain. They shine.
And you use to shine so bright I swore I saw stars in your eyes but I watched you slowley fade away. (Back to where I didn't want you to be)
This empty feeling inside won't go away. Unless your here to make everything bad go away.. away... ( ohh)
Chorus: And the Febuary stars they never let me down. But you? Ohhh hooo When I was crying and looked up the night sky There they were. Just like the night before. (Febuary stars.. ohh)
<Back to piano>
La la la The Febuary Stars. Never seem to fade. Even in the rain. They shine.
Do you remember looking up at them that night. We felt as if we could took eachother through them...
Now the damage has been done. You over did it.. just a little much this time...
(Back to guitar and other instruments) Throw me down, I'll get back up. Just know it gets harder everytime. Please just tell me why you hurt me if you never wanted to...
<piano> la la la ohh.. la la.. shine..
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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 21, 2009 15:38:35 GMT -5
wow, sounds really good. I'd love to hear u sing that, it'd be so awesome! (:
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Post by |*|Long Live|*| on Apr 21, 2009 17:56:08 GMT -5
Awe thanks! (: I'm workin on it hehe.
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