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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 19, 2009 17:59:10 GMT -5
Hearts apart until the end: a poem Hearts apart until the end, for this is how we're destined. This pain inside with every beat, increasing with chagrin each silent weep. Blinded by love, and now by hatred, my time with you I still hold sacred. If only things could rebegin, and release this agony from within. Hearts apart until the end, I can't go on without my lover, my friend.
Comment, please.! This poem took me a while to write. I really love it, and I will NOT tolerate it if someone steals it. Thanks (:
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Post by ellohv_ee on Apr 19, 2009 22:39:58 GMT -5
THIS IS AMAZING. (:
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Post by gwen||* on Apr 20, 2009 12:30:25 GMT -5
Wow Julie. =) I love it.
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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 20, 2009 15:10:47 GMT -5
thanks guys xD
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Post by MileyLove!R on Apr 20, 2009 19:00:38 GMT -5
omggggg! U ROCK!!! Write a poem about me!
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Post by *innocence«} on Apr 20, 2009 19:36:30 GMT -5
thanks Jess. Err, I would, but it'd be kinda weird. Or are you joking? Cuz if you are, I'm not catching on I don't really write poems all the time, just when i have spare time and if I'm really really bored.
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Post by |*|Long Live|*| on Apr 20, 2009 19:54:23 GMT -5
WOAH! Amazing! Edit: Where do you get your inspriation?
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